Your comical timings are poor. Also, too much cliches ruin the momentum.
Also if you are into meme philosophy, you might note that your post would benefit if it had more meta-ironic content.
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Ok ty for the constructive feedback.
It took me a whole night to finish it, it was a lot of work so I kinda lost my train of though when writing it out.
Thx anyway.
Ist actually good 👌would be better if you had some sort of flashback as to who puppey killed in that dimension for your next work(if there would be any)
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I hope you enjoy.
The links are better cause you can zoom in.
Page 1 https://imgur.com/a/BpfLA#AKvKF5w
Page 2 http://imgur.com/a/MDv6b
Page 3http://imgur.com/a/Fwp4Y
Page 4 http://imgur.com/a/POaJS
Final Page http://imgur.com/a/9rTB5